Machina Mirabili (Web Version)

This is a really great story and engaging experience! I was really invested in the story and the characters' relationships! I had a fun time replaying the game and trying to get the best ending! The UI and overall visual elements were really nice and felt professional. It might just be me, but when the first "booting..." screen came up, I didn't realize that you had to click on the screen to bring you to the next screen and I stared at it for a solid few minutes, so I would suggest possibly making that more obvious. Otherwise, this was a really amazing game experience that felt very well-thought-out, great job!

the writing, design, and art is all beautiful wowie. ive only known everett for ten minutes but i would absolutely die for him

The art showed up at first, and it was really pretty! It sporadically came up during the half after the portal. I got to "It doesn't matter. Now walk." and then the game froze ;;w; I think it's because I started typing in the comments maybe? Either way, from what I was able to play it seems like you all have a strong game technically. Story wise I know its just be beginning that I could play and I'm sure theres more to it (and the art probably helps) but it feels like things move very fast or without much explanation. We did only have a few weeks to work on this though so I don't blame y'all in the slightest. Good work!!